L[o/i]ve
The look they saw
in each other's eyes
was the start of something
[tr/m]agic.
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Completed 8 May 2009.
Title: "L[o/i]ve." DeviantART won't allow brackets or slashes in the title, for whatever reason they may have. Makes me sad, too, because that's the only meaningful title I've had in a while. =/ Written as a Request for ~Slipping-Star. I'm having a lot fun with these brackets. Thank you, ~chrysanthe-aL! ( [link] )  Anywho, I went out driving today, in search of inspiration, and ended up stopping in some hole-in-the-wall town in the next county over. It was very beautiful, but also very strange. My families' names were still on street signs, and on tombstones at churches I'd never seen. It was very much worth the drive. Merlin Comments
 oooooh i get it :'D
.....its kind of depressing :/ but i like it :3 -- Har Har Har Pirates :'D  Made of awesome.
The brackets definitely make the poem what it is! -- "You desire and do not take; You love and you are too afraid to feel your love; You are afraid to look inside your soul and see what you are. That is why you are a liar." --Arkan, Winterking (Alison Croggon's Pellinor series)  The brackets are a great idea, I love the effect.
Beautiful short piece. <3  =\ ...
 ...  ...=\-- The meaning of life is the art of movement. You can't understand how a candle is bright unless it is dark when you light it.  Isn't that annoying! i hate the title rules especially when brackets and parentheses play huge part in it. anyway awesome poem the [tr/m]agic and the truth of it really struck me.
-- I gasp and hold my breath these needs have changed so deep to face you all and say I've been awake forever.  ooo i love it
-- You can't always get what you want.  Merlin my friend, you are a genius. This piece is quite amazing...possibly a bit depressing, but very very genuine and exemplarary. By the way, the brackets totally make the poem...very clever.
-- "This is all an illusion Love is the only reality" ~Restroom Graffiti Thanks.
Merlin -- Are there no stones in heaven but what serve for the thunder? "Othello," William Shakespeare Thank you, ~phosphorene!
The brackets were really fun to work with.  Merlin -- Are there no stones in heaven but what serve for the thunder? "Othello," William Shakespeare |
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