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It has been said that a camera can steal a piece of a person’s soul.  Where Nikki Casterline is concerned the papers are still undecided, thank God, even if the lawyers aren’t.  Some headlines scream that Serena sold Nikki’s soul to the Devil himself, but of course that is utter nonsense.  No mother would be capable of such a thing, and a soul should certainly have afforded the Casterlines a more posh and comely existence than the one they had.  But in those days men were rather eager to sell, so perhaps some sort of divine inflation was to blame.  Nevertheless, the publicity was undoubtedly good for the family.  It was possible for a man of no mean distinction to argue for either side in the debate halls of England’s most ancient and esteemed colleges without the slightest mark against his honor.  Such lively debate would certainly make it hard for any absolute condemnation of young Miss Casterline, even if it could be proved that, when Mr. de Gaultier pressed the shutter release at the orphanage’s annual summer picnic, nothing happened.

Like most children, Nikki Casterline had been instructed not to play with her father’s matches.  Like most children, she did it anyways.  She positively giggled when the white phosphorus ignited.  She had thought that the fire would be red, like blood, but it wasn’t.  Instead it was yellow, almost white.  Like her mother’s wedding dress.  She held them close to see if they matched.  They did.  It also matched the old lace her great-grandmother had woven.  And the skin of her favorite dollie, the dollie that looked like Alice, the dollie that had her mother’s hair.  The fire matched that, too.  She knew there would be no need for an undertaker.
Nikki was fond of cats, if that explains anything.  All cats.  All of them except for lions.  Her mother used to tell her that Nikki meant cat, but Nikki knows better.  It means victory.

The oldest memory that John has is of being in darkness.  It’s so old that it almost might be the darkness of the womb, except that it’s cold and the floor is hard and John knows he’s been locked in the basement.  In those days it was not proper for a man to have a mistress, though most men did.  It was not proper for a maidservant to bear her master’s son, though most women would.  The child would be beaten, yes, abused, yes, and disowned for the remainder of his father’s life.  But with uncanny frequency the child would inherit all his father’s worldly possessions, as his other sons would die, with uncanny frequency, before they could even toddle across the parlor.  All that John had to do was to endure.  His mother would take care of the rest.  His left hand was hopelessly crippled from when his father had dug his heel into the back of it, just to hear him scream.  He still had a scar on his back that looked like Peter Cottontail.
The papers never decided on exactly who shot Mr. Witten.  Some blamed his bank partner.  Others blamed a crook.  Not one of them mentioned the illegitimate son who inherited a family mansion, its contents, a full partnership in a respectable bank, and almost fifty thousand pounds sterling from his illegitimate father.  It would have been indecent, they said.

It was raining, and Nikki hated rain.  She hated it because it reminded her of her mother, who hated sunlight, and Serena hated sunlight because it made blood boil, especially John’s.  When the skies were bright, Nikki could escape.  Serena couldn’t.  Serena always thought this terribly unfair, but it would not be proper for an Englishwoman to be seen galloping down Fleet Street.  Of course, it was raining now, so there was no need to worry about that.  
Today Serena occupied herself with her needlework.  Nikki sat in the corner, playing with her favorite doll.  Serena had made it, to look like her sister, Alice.  Alice also had one.  Hers looked like Nikki.  Cleaner?—maybe.  Perhaps a little gentler of face.  But nothing was changed in any extravagant manner.  Just enough so that Serena could delude herself into thinking that she had two beautiful daughters instead of…  
She used to have one, she told herself firmly, and then told herself it would be proper to think about other things.
“That will never do!” Nikki admonished the doll, straightening it’s dress.  Serena often said the same thing to Nikki before brushing her hair or bandaging her knees or neatly folding an unsalvageable pair of stockings.  Or when her father beat her, almost always when it rained.  Serena remembers listening to her daughters, one day, before such a storm.  Alice and Nikki had found a cloud that looked like Peter Cottontail.  Then John came home and put Peter Cottontail on Nikki.
Serena looked up, and her eyes and Nikki’s locked.  Nikki smiled sweetly, innocently, her eyes empty of emotion, but not of thought.  Serena hated those eyes.  She had stared at her father that way, after he put Peter Cottontail on her side.  Then the river took Alice.  And the police took John.  And John took his money with him.
“Why don’t you go upstairs, darling?” Serena asked Nikki.  
“But Mommy!” she squealed girlishly.  “I want to stay with you.  I’m learning to sew and I might need your help.”  She held up the needle and thread she had been using to repair holes that had been made in Alice’s dress.  What she did not hold up was the knife she had used to make those holes, but Serena knew it was there.  Stupid Nikki.
“Oh darling!” Serena took a moment to compose herself, like a proper English  mother, took a deep breath, and glided over to her daughter.
“Nikki, you precious thing!  You will never do!”  Then she embraced Nikki, and Nikki embraced her, smiling coldly.  Serena was an excellent actress.

The last thing that Alice Casterline heard before the river dragged her down was her sister calling out to her.  She didn’t hear the laughter.  The body had never been found.  There’d been no need for an undertaker.
©2008-2009 =TEC-ThePenOfMerlin
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Author's Comments

Completed 7-24-08

Rough draft? I'm a bit inexperienced in writing short fiction that's actually... short. My last one was that forty page monstrosity, remember? I should get some credit there, right? ^^;

Written for ~Kitz-the-Kitsune.

I sort of borrowed her nameless psychopath from "Minesweeper" ( [link] ), but the time period is changed, and so is the story, and I didn't use any of her people at all, and the setting is different, so...

This is kind of experimental also. I've been studying the art of the short story (also known as READING) and decided I would try to be as breif as possible but still try to tell a story. How'd I do, guys? I seriously want comment overdose on this one.

Yeah... I'll be waiting anxiously for replies.

Merlin

Cast of Characters:

Marc-Olivier de Gaultier-->A manager at an orphanage in London, where Nikki is sent after the death of her mother.

Nikki Casterline-->My altered version of ~Kitz-the-Kitsune's psychopath.

John Casterline-->son of George Witten and his maid. Father of Nikki and Alice, husband of Serena.

Serena Casterline-->Mother of Nikki and Alice, wife of John.

Alice Casterline-->Twin sister of Nikki Casterline and favored child of John and Serena.

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:iconbellapotter:
ALICE. Sorry, automatic-Twilighter reaction. FLEET STREET. Sweeney Todddddd. . .no, anyway, I love the story. :lol:

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so, tell me, darling, do you wish we'd fall in love? [all the time, all the time.]---the saltwater room; owl city
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
You can't get much more British than Alice. ;)

I'm glad I didn't screw it up, then. Thanks! :D

Merlin

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"A nation without a language is a nation without a heart."--Welsh Proverb

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:iconbellapotter:
:) No problem.

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so, tell me, darling, do you wish we'd fall in love? [all the time, all the time.]---the saltwater room; owl city
:iconphosphorene:
This is excellent.
Everyone seems to be practising short stories lately...maybe I should jump on the bandwagon. *thoughtful*
And a last thought...post more stories, please! Your work is so much fun to read!

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I awake from a daze, pacing an eternity on cold concrete and asphalt beneath a night sky stained with ice...

"A Dream of Ice"
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
:lol: I'm glad that you like it!

You must have a strange sense of humor. XD

YOU HAVE STORIES! And we haven't seen updates in FOREVER! I started watching you because of "Finding the Hidden," remember?

Merlin

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"A nation without a language is a nation without a heart."--Welsh Proverb

How To Save A Life
:iconphosphorene:
XD Am I to understand that this is a mandate to update?
I'll get working on it...=D

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I awake from a daze, pacing an eternity on cold concrete and asphalt beneath a night sky stained with ice...

"A Dream of Ice"
:iconbellapotter:
:nod:

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so, tell me, darling, do you wish we'd fall in love? [all the time, all the time.]---the saltwater room; owl city
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
No, but you may take it as a casual reminder not in any way to be enforced by a legion of flying cows. *evil chuckle*

Merlin

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"A nation without a language is a nation without a heart."--Welsh Proverb

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