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So you say that my words
                                           mean
                                                      nothing?
Well here,
let me write that down.
©2008-2009 =TEC-ThePenOfMerlin
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:

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Written 3-22-08

:noes: It's a... a... DEVIATION!!!

Merlin

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:iconroninrapusodi:
very nice. Probably one of my favorites of yours. I like the shape aspect.

--
The darkness can only be as deep as you allow. Light a candle, and all is clear.
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
It's the only one I've posted since you've added me to your WATCHlist. My older work is much better. Thank you though. :hug:

Merlin

--
Remnants of the past here
pass like light through dust as memories,
for bleeding,
like pain.


'Stiff Kittens' by Blaqk Audio

How To Save A Life: [link]
:iconroninrapusodi:
^,^ well I like it, and that's all that matters.

Wow, pride much?

--
The darkness can only be as deep as you allow. Light a candle, and all is clear.
:iconmoggetchan:
OMIGOD! YO..YOU...YOU POSTED SOMETHING! GRAB THE PITCHFORKS AND TORCHES! SOMETHING MOST BE WRONG!! NOOO!

Anyway...I like your poem! :D

--
"Have you ever thought about dying?"
"Yeah."
"How do you want to go?"
"Naked."
"Why?"
"Because that's how I came in."

member of Dazzle-club [link] and Madina Lake [link]
:icontime-warrior:
"You" is entitled to an opinion, I suppose. But if your words occupy a space (at least that) they cannot have the value of nothing. As for meaning of (whether it's nothing), "you" would have to have the ability to understand the value of the words in the context of the space in which they occupy and admit they mean something (they just don't choose to acknowledge it).
I think. :lol:

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Live simply. Love generously. Care deeply. Speak kindly.
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
No pride. No sarcasm, either. It's just that I don't think of this as a good piece. I can show you some of my other stuff at school if you remind me.

Merlin

--
Remnants of the past here
pass like light through dust as memories,
for bleeding,
like pain.


'Stiff Kittens' by Blaqk Audio

How To Save A Life: [link]
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
Well of course something's wrong. Something's always wrong anymore.

I'm glad that you liked it. :thanks:

Merlin

--
Remnants of the past here
pass like light through dust as memories,
for bleeding,
like pain.


'Stiff Kittens' by Blaqk Audio

How To Save A Life: [link]
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
Would the same apply to a space of time or thought? It's doubtful that something as fleeting as a sound or as corruptible as a thought would have much worth though the eyes of emotion and ignorance. They may pause to let them pass, but they only do so because not to would mean to have them fester and grow before their eyes into emotion, an equal, rather than just so much insignificant waffle that can be instantly discarded without reason. Worth is relative. Man may stomp on a bug and call the act insignificant, but to a bird that bug meant life.

Hmmm...

Merlin

--
Remnants of the past here
pass like light through dust as memories,
for bleeding,
like pain.


'Stiff Kittens' by Blaqk Audio

How To Save A Life: [link]
:iconwronggirl:
love this! simple but deep
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
:hug:

Merlin

--
Remnants of the past here
pass like light through dust as memories,
for bleeding,
like pain.


'Stiff Kittens' by Blaqk Audio

How To Save A Life: [link]

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