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She misses those moonlit days
and sunny nights
when pills popped
like balloons and bubblegum
and the fantasy was still
...alive.

He misses the time
when she took his hand in hers
and they drew the world
in crayon and charcoal
and hung it upside down from the ceiling
just because they could.

He still believes in primary colors.
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:

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Completed 10 May 2009.

[I miss those days, too.]

Merlin

A picture by the ever-astounding ~Toma7: [link] . :D

The rhythm sucks, I know, but it was fun to write. v.v

I apologize for the repeated edits.

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:icontoma7:
we all do :|

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RavMon.exe
:icontoma7:
I hope you like it :heart:
[link]

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RavMon.exe
:iconetre-aime:
eeep. i do love this. :aww:

especially -
when pills popped
like balloons and bubblegum
and the fantasy was still
...alive.
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
I know. :(

How do you like the second bit I added? Better with or without?

Merlin

--
Are there no stones in heaven
but what serve for the thunder?


"Othello," William Shakespeare
:iconmystic-in-purple:
One just has to be willing to keep the fantasy alive. I applaude you Merlin

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"This is all an illusion
Love is the only reality"
~Restroom Graffiti
:icontime-warrior:
:D Wow! And ~Toma7's illustration is excellent!

"He still believes in primary colors." ---> you might like this, I just found it in my deviations from one of the artists I watch: [link]

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Live simply. Love generously. Care deeply. Speak kindly.
:icontoma7:
hmm.. i sat down for an hour trying to think of ways to portray the second half of it, but no luck...

hmm... I don't know.

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RavMon.exe
:iconbellapotter:
Better with the second bit, I think. It adds more of a . . . story feel to it. If that makes any sense. :XD:

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doubt thou the stars are fire; doubt that the sun doth move; doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt i love.---'hamlet', act 2, scene 2; william shakespeare
:icononlyxxxsunshine:
this is like a poetry version of a prose piece i wrote. hmm.

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shameless self-promotion. shameless.

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